kiwishrew (EUW)
: Kudos on your creativity, but just so you know the word "groin" means pelvic area in English (like where the genitals are roughly located), so you might wanna consider changing his name or English readers like myself may not initially understand that this is a serious post (I did think in the non-translated post that this was a troll-post). And yeah, I reckon Riot would have a bit of a conundrum introducing dwarves into Runeterra; they like to have their own races for the most part. As for abilities, the courier passive is an interesting choice. I can't help feeling that it introduces a level of micromanagement Riot would again be uncomfortable implementing (which is why you can't control Lamb and Wolf separately when playing Kindred). His other abilities seem okay too (perhaps slightly underwhelming in terms of I don't know what he really has the potential to do that other champion's can't do better), buuut his tower repairing seems a bit too strong if it permanently repairs damage from a wrecked turret, and I don't even know what to properly think of his ult. It sort of seems like a Xerath ult with a repairy element to it? Overall, my main problem with your idea is I can't tell what your champion is supposed to be. His Q makes me want to build attack speed to take advantage of the brief buff, but I don't know whether his attacks are ranged or melee. If they're melee, it seems to make his E a bit useless because it knocks people out of his attack range. His ult makes me want to build damage, otherwise it seems rather underwhelming. His passives make me want to run him as some kind of utility support/jungler (?), so he can run between lanes repairing turrets, but this ability will be stupidly powerful early game and worthless late game when everyone's towers are down. And his kit just doesn't have the utility to support or gank especially well. Also I would have to assume he can't repair unless out of combat, because it would be ridiculous if he could. TLDR: Interesting, creative, flawed. Might wanna consider renaming him to something less pelvic
https://boards.eune.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/community-creations-en/Nx3A3YWd-jardun-living-storm
: You put so much work into it but than end up with the name Groin?
https://boards.eune.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/community-creations-en/Nx3A3YWd-jardun-living-storm
: Jórdun- living storm
Btw thanks for all comments.
: I feel like the ability names should be changed...
It's Finish tongue. I think it's good bcs he is from North (Freljord) {{sticker:sg-ahri-2}}
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: Groin-Master builder
I'm posting the new version of this champ. Check out my new concepts
: You put so much work into it but than end up with the name Groin?
It's already changed
: The idea is great, but both lore and kit need some polishing. First of all, "Thror" and "Fundin" are names from Lord of the Rings franchise, and you'll have to change them. For now, let's call him Th. Second: Oorn and Volibear never actually met, and Volibear is not a god. He's a bear, from bear nation, that lives in the northeast part of Freljord. He's also considered a good character, while Oorn is apparently neutral, so they have no reason to fight, even if they will ever meet. Th's E looks too similar to Kled's Q in unmounted form, and probably won't make it to the complete version. Although slowing and pushing back is a good idea for an ability, especially if he'll be played as support, shotgun might not fit well logically. Turret repairing ability sounds great, but it existed once in other form: Heimerdinger gave passive hp regen for nearby turrets. I think, that Riot had a reason to remove it, and they will probably do the same here. His R looks too much like Xerath's in 3 shots part and GP's in using large artillery, that is stationed who-knows-where and covers all map. If you are interested, I can suggest the following corrections for those abilities: E: generally the same, but with hammer swing instead of shot, shorter but wider attack cone. W: passive is the same, but active would be placing a small fortification (sort of similar to Yorick's W) nearby. It won't disappear over time, would lower incoming damage from enemies and slow their movement. R: Th will pull a giant rock out of the ground and smash his enemies with it; also, other idea: W: active would be toss of a smaller hammer in a straight line, first champion hit will be stunned for a short duration (like 0.1/0.15/0.2/0.25/0.3 sec) R: Th builds a small runic circle, that can be occupied by any ally, it will boost their def and mr ( 10/20/30% of Th's def and mr) and slow passing enemies for 15%. Apart of mentioned things, idea is very good. After some work and drawing, this would make a great champion concept. And, in case Riot won't add dwarves, you can always just make it a secluded village of mountain dwellers.
Ty for comment I'll do what u say with drawing too but it will take a time so wait please and when i do it answer what i do good or bad {{sticker:slayer-jinx-catface}}
: Roeh- new adc
If you don't like it please write me what a can do better
: Roeh- new adc
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: Groin-Master builder
Sorry guys but i can't change the name of board {{sticker:cass-cry}}
kiwishrew (EUW)
: Kudos on your creativity, but just so you know the word "groin" means pelvic area in English (like where the genitals are roughly located), so you might wanna consider changing his name or English readers like myself may not initially understand that this is a serious post (I did think in the non-translated post that this was a troll-post). And yeah, I reckon Riot would have a bit of a conundrum introducing dwarves into Runeterra; they like to have their own races for the most part. As for abilities, the courier passive is an interesting choice. I can't help feeling that it introduces a level of micromanagement Riot would again be uncomfortable implementing (which is why you can't control Lamb and Wolf separately when playing Kindred). His other abilities seem okay too (perhaps slightly underwhelming in terms of I don't know what he really has the potential to do that other champion's can't do better), buuut his tower repairing seems a bit too strong if it permanently repairs damage from a wrecked turret, and I don't even know what to properly think of his ult. It sort of seems like a Xerath ult with a repairy element to it? Overall, my main problem with your idea is I can't tell what your champion is supposed to be. His Q makes me want to build attack speed to take advantage of the brief buff, but I don't know whether his attacks are ranged or melee. If they're melee, it seems to make his E a bit useless because it knocks people out of his attack range. His ult makes me want to build damage, otherwise it seems rather underwhelming. His passives make me want to run him as some kind of utility support/jungler (?), so he can run between lanes repairing turrets, but this ability will be stupidly powerful early game and worthless late game when everyone's towers are down. And his kit just doesn't have the utility to support or gank especially well. Also I would have to assume he can't repair unless out of combat, because it would be ridiculous if he could. TLDR: Interesting, creative, flawed. Might wanna consider renaming him to something less pelvic
He is melee, but E gives too big slow so they cant run from him. He should be tank but u can go ap and deal lots of damage. E is AD so you can go AD too. It's yours choice what you will be building. Potential is in his W and passive. You can play him on support bcs of your passive, or on mid and goes AP burst, on top, which is his main lane, and goes tank, or even in jg and you dont have to go back, and even you can go gank someone and then repair their turret. I think its good potential. Btw thanks for comment {{sticker:slayer-jinx-wink}}
: Groin-Master builder
I would like if riot thinking of create my champ
: Groin-Master builder
Btw guys if you have problem with the dwarf he could be yordl. {{champion:78}}
: Groin-Master builder
There is a translate version https://boards.eune.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/community-creations-en/BLdhRkA2-groin-master-builder{{sticker:slayer-jinx-catface}} {{sticker:slayer-pantheon-thumbs}}
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kiwishrew (EUW)
: The only bits I understood were "Groin-Master Builder" and "Do you want him?" Okay I guess! {{sticker:slayer-pantheon-thumbs}}
Sry I'll try to translate
: Groin-Master builder
Sry but it's too much for me to translate it {{sticker:sg-janna}}
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: De los Muertos Gangplank
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