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Idk if you're on the right video, but I doubt it a little bit. Anyway, have a great day, luv. {{sticker:sona-playing}}
: Not bad. If u used a bit less reverb it might help make you sound a bit more clear. Also reduce the music volume a bit so your voice stands out more from the background sounds. Other than that, I like it. Your cadence is good (although sometimes you could take a bit of a longer break here and there to mark the end of a passage/sentence, just half a second or a second or so, but it might help structure the reading a bit more i think). Your intonation is great, and it really makes the reading come alive. Your pronounciation could use a tiny bit of work, but I know from experience german accents can be hard to lose completely. Which is why I'm really looking forward to hearing a reading in your native german [although I've never actually read a piece of lore in german tbh]. Anyway, don't be discouraged by this, all of these things are pretty nitpicky complaints. Good luck with this project.
Thank you very much for your help! No worries, your words didn't discouraged me in any way - they totally did the opposite! I'll try to use your advise in the german translation next! Also thanks for the positive words. I'm trying hard to lose that get rid of this awful accent, but well, sometimes it just wants to show that it's still there. {{champion:122}} Anyway, I hope you can enjoy the german lore aswell & again big thanks. {{sticker:sg-ahri-2}}
: F E E T C A M on a serious note, you should make ur voice more clear in these vids, and maybe lower the music in the background
Thank you very much, I'll note that down. {{sticker:katarina-love}}
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