: > [{quoted}](name=TrikRisk,realm=EUW,application-id=Mpd1UjGe,discussion-id=PFNa7tYR,comment-id=0001,timestamp=2018-11-06T19:31:33.202+0000) > > this is thought out! i like it, but off course he needs to be more in the line of Runeterra so just make him an hextech guy from Piltover. so he basically is countered by a ziggs botlane which is good > > if you want, check out my champ concept. soon to be revamped! > https://boards.euw.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/community-creations-en/m5jirUfG-champion-concept-shiru-the-young-lightning Thx for the reply I posted a comment at below of your concept, fine work. Read it when you have time and share my suggestion. In his story he will be almost everywhere. Why are you suggest, to me that make him a hextech guy? ( It's not Îngwaz work or it's just your another profile)?
I am Ingwaz, cant remember that accounts pass nor name. I'd just see it fit more to Runeterra than a Cyborg like that. Did you draw the champ? he looks more like a skin line like Project rather than his own thing
: New Champion suggestion [Champion Concept]
this is thought out! i like it, but off course he needs to be more in the line of Runeterra so just make him an hextech guy from Piltover. so he basically is countered by a ziggs botlane which is good if you want, check out my champ concept. soon to be revamped! https://boards.euw.leagueoflegends.com/en/c/community-creations-en/m5jirUfG-champion-concept-shiru-the-young-lightning
FruziaFru (EUNE)
: Lux Fan VU
wow! simple yet remarkable! love it. 1 thing only, her ingame face has a less friendly expression from afar and doll like while close. the rest is lux! upvoted!{{sticker:slayer-pantheon-thumbs}}
Cupia (EUW)
: Elderwood Zoe
nice style of have going on and those glass wings...{{sticker:slayer-pantheon-rainbows}} this is something
TrikRisk (EUW)
: Yoru - the Bidding of Balance (Sign Combo System) [Hardest Champion Concept]
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Stelllo (EUW)
: I really just like the whole concept of yasuo's brother coming back. Skills seem to be pretty solid too! Hope your idea makes it :D
yea me too! meanwhile you could check my other favorite concepts: Yoru - The Bidding of Balance and Sigil - The Marsh Warden. Sigil i didnt make him but i suggested an ability kit. check them out, they're great! specially Sigil
12a12b12d (EUNE)
: Definitely not Darius!
this is so great hahah but first he needs vu as garen did and then BOOM magic happens
Stelllo (EUW)
: Pretty god darn good idea! :O
Why thank you! This thread is really old xD but thank you too for reminding me that I need to upgrade this (only visually and items, i think) what did you like the most»? the skills?
: Logged in just to say: Stop pushing this concept. We get it, it's well done but the kit is so generic and the whole champion theme is absolutely nothing special.
thats what i thought. if you're gonna comment, comment the whole thread
: Logged in just to say: Stop pushing this concept. We get it, it's well done but the kit is so generic and the whole champion theme is absolutely nothing special.
Um... And did you see my kit suggestion? Because it doesnt seem só xD my kit is, IMO, pretty good and not generic.
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: Fair enough. :p You really thought it through. That says a lot about you :3 In a good way.
Thank you very much :3 Maybe we can play tomorrow if you have time.
: I think that, more or less, you listened to my "combo" idea right? I've always wanted that on a champ <3. Regarding his combos: QEW- I think you forgot to put "Your sends 2/2/3/3/4 BOMBS" in the text. I think some of them are kinda weak. For example, WW's stun duration is way too low in my opinion. Even for a champ like him. Other lack a "distinct" feeling(which is really rare, your "tahm kench" ability seems one though-I like the idea but try to make it have a special effect-).Other than that, its great. However, you did well. Really well. It was kinda hard for me to understand it all but I think I go it. :p Good job. About my hard understanding.. you should "fragment", the passive, aka make it in a text form and explain it with your Q and W and E. Its really complicated. (Not sure if I explained myself well though) {{sticker:slayer-jinx-wink}}
P.S.: Thank you very much to read it all again, I really appreciate it. I wish Riot reads this :S Also the bombs were there, you must have skipped it but i don't blame you, it's a LOT of text.
: I think that, more or less, you listened to my "combo" idea right? I've always wanted that on a champ <3. Regarding his combos: QEW- I think you forgot to put "Your sends 2/2/3/3/4 BOMBS" in the text. I think some of them are kinda weak. For example, WW's stun duration is way too low in my opinion. Even for a champ like him. Other lack a "distinct" feeling(which is really rare, your "tahm kench" ability seems one though-I like the idea but try to make it have a special effect-).Other than that, its great. However, you did well. Really well. It was kinda hard for me to understand it all but I think I go it. :p Good job. About my hard understanding.. you should "fragment", the passive, aka make it in a text form and explain it with your Q and W and E. Its really complicated. (Not sure if I explained myself well though) {{sticker:slayer-jinx-wink}}
Yes i did, i tried it before but i failed. I might remove that spirit ride though into another thing. Regarding WW's stun, the duration is good because (imagining you are running from someone) you can do WW EQW(and the decoy can even still the movement) and then WW right away because of the low cooldown he has inbetween. I'll try to re-arange passive to make it more understandable. being english my second langague(if i can say that) its kind of hard to do so xD
: Awesome. I mean, its way more than awesome. Really good. Really, really good. ^*^ Cannot wait for the rest. However, you should set up for a better lore. Make him have a special purpose before entering the temple- or after? Also, follow a certain theme. Be careful not to make him too OP though. Having so many abilites.. its hard to balance. I also agree with what alkanthor said (Q- always AA empower, W- always dash...), but it depends on what you want to achieve with the rest of the kit. IMO, every sign should be kinda weak, but powerful if you combine them (a special combo effect would be nice and good for balancing it)
i reworked the whole way that his Signs function to a more hard and complex and also rewarding and less op. if you want to check it out.
SoulBawz (EUW)
: yea ill read the other ones too after my game, im starting now ^^
i reworked the whole way that his Signs function to a more hard and complex and also rewarding and less op. if you want to check it out.
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: 10/10 would play
thank you! did you read the whole abilities description?
Krestek (EUNE)
: Lee Sin has his W for utility/mobility and E only for damage (and slight cc).. Riot doesn't use any rules for Q,W, or E when making a character. Lux's Q is a snare, W damage, E utility.. Jax Q mobility/damage, W damage, E utility.. it's different for each champ.
it is but recently they have almost a padron of Q= poke W=utility E=escape. but putting away the skill padron and gay conversation, what do you think about the finished kit i put on?
: Awesome. I mean, its way more than awesome. Really good. Really, really good. ^*^ Cannot wait for the rest. However, you should set up for a better lore. Make him have a special purpose before entering the temple- or after? Also, follow a certain theme. Be careful not to make him too OP though. Having so many abilites.. its hard to balance. I also agree with what alkanthor said (Q- always AA empower, W- always dash...), but it depends on what you want to achieve with the rest of the kit. IMO, every sign should be kinda weak, but powerful if you combine them (a special combo effect would be nice and good for balancing it)
Krestek (EUNE)
: The greatest idea so far. It needs more balancing (still didn't check other spells but that's my opinion), however, that's Riot's part I guess. It's a brilliant idea of a champion so +1! and I hope they make it!!
i've updated it, dunno if you still are interested in seeing the kit. its quite big xD
SoulBawz (EUW)
: i am really happy you took my advice into account, dont forget the shoutouts when this champ goes live :P
ahah np. "when it goes live" more like IF! i wish. but what do you think of the skills? do this: if you don't want to check all those skills(they are a lot) just say you don't want to, i rather have that than an unfinished "review". but thank you anyway
SoulBawz (EUW)
: but lee sin is so weak lategame :/ and that q has passive lifesteal so no need to activate it
Ebola san (EUNE)
: Zed would be really pissed with this guy.... His days are numbered. Aslo, shen would be his ally Also, he looks gay, Taric would love him
It would be nice to have a gay for us to look up to and not for us to only mock off.
: Would she have all abilities unlocked at lvl 1? Also, try and use q as damage spell, w as utility, and e as mobility, that's what riot uses. Also, will she use mana or energy or some other resource? I believe she's kinda like udyr, but with spells modifying spells not auto attacks. So energy pool of 200 with each ability costing 30 and secondary part costing 10 and her next auto attack resorting 20 energy seems nice. She technically has 16 abilities so I don't think she'll be easy to play, kinda like Lee sin. She'd be the mix Lee sin and azir and only professionals would use her and if shes easy, professionals would reck their opponents ass. Hear me out, give her a ultimate which is somewhat like zileans w, it gives her 50% cdr and maybe a passive on ultimate. Anyways, send like a nice idea although numbers needs to be tweaked heavily, waiting for full specification <b> TL;DR </b> No fuck you read it noob
TL;DR so nice xD. as for the energy, if i did that it would be some how to play like lee sin... and i dont want that. i want mana on this MAN(yes its a man D':) to burn it down and you need the manamune on this guy. he will be more like jayce and less like lee sin, so you can get confortable at mid-late game because of the ammount of mana you have in your pocket, so you can BOOM BOOM your skills, or is that too op? if i do an energy dude it will be pure damage on the items. also, you can do manamune and for the crazy guys you could go for an essence reaver! xD that would be crazy. but my initial thoughts on this guy would be {{item:3004}} and{{item:3078}} for that deep op'ness.
: why he look like a Korean overlord
because its probably a korean art... i dunno, i didnt make the art, i was specific about that
Papuciitis (EUNE)
: Looks hard, but seems interesting ;) ! _That's what she said, huehuehue :D_
SoulBawz (EUW)
: that q gives just as much lifesteal as a unique passive from bloodthirster, damn
lee sin's W has 25% lifesteal at lvl 5 xD but even so i'll change that, i dont want another lee sin here.
Krestek (EUNE)
: The greatest idea so far. It needs more balancing (still didn't check other spells but that's my opinion), however, that's Riot's part I guess. It's a brilliant idea of a champion so +1! and I hope they make it!!
Thank you very much! yes, ill do them tomorrow with a more clear head. tune in!
Alkanthor (EUNE)
: Really interresting, however, for the next signs please keep the mechanics of his abilities the same. This means, that no matter the sign, Q always empowers next autoatack, W is always a dash or a leap and E is always a skillshot. Looking forward the continuation
I thought about it but if i do Q for empowered auto attacks and so on, won't that be too easy? too linear? i thought like, if you go all damage you do a QW, WE, EQ(example, not final) and if you want all escape and CC you do another, as well as for utility. hmm... its something to think about... i want to make this the hardest champion concept, so i dont know if Q for this and etc will help with that... ill see when i'm clear tomorrow. also, i cant think of a balanced ult... either it will be a weak but useful/utility ultimate or it will be use to trigger the signs right at level 1... which is better? Keep in mind: I don't update lore and abilities right now 'cus i'm drunk and sleepy right now, which, for me, are the worst combinations, i just need to sleep.
SoulBawz (EUW)
: i think the q is broken as hell tho :c but i love the idea so much, with a bit more balancing this would be great
why is it broken? i will update tomorrow and i need the feedback. I'm talking as i am a serious employee for Riot xD but whaATEVER i will update it tomorrow
: Awesome. I mean, its way more than awesome. Really good. Really, really good. ^*^ Cannot wait for the rest. However, you should set up for a better lore. Make him have a special purpose before entering the temple- or after? Also, follow a certain theme. Be careful not to make him too OP though. Having so many abilites.. its hard to balance. I also agree with what alkanthor said (Q- always AA empower, W- always dash...), but it depends on what you want to achieve with the rest of the kit. IMO, every sign should be kinda weak, but powerful if you combine them (a special combo effect would be nice and good for balancing it)
Regarding the skills, see the responde i gave to Alkanthor. Regarding his lore, i'm tired of creating lore and people not recognising the lore almost every time(i made A LOT of champ concepts). but as you asked, tomorrow i will add a complete lore. when i complete it i can PM you for you to check it out and leave your comment. :) thank you for the feedback. Keep in mind: I don't update lore and abilities right now 'cus i'm drunk and sleepy, which, for me, are the worst combinations, i just need to sleep.
Arcadeath (EUNE)
: They will definitely release more, but keep in mind that they need to put great effort and time to make skins of such quality.
visually wise they don't NECESSARILY but program wise they do, i think.
Infernape (EUW)
: Are Riot ever going to make more ultimate skins or are the DJ Sona, Pulsefire Ezreal and Spirit Guard Udyr skins the only ones they're ever going to make?
i do think so... they planned an ultimate this year but it seems they didnt make(?) or was dj sona this year?
Cavalier (EUNE)
: Cute idea . Too bad it wont ever happen .
yea i think so too... it helps to hope and believe though
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xDree (EUNE)
: Hello dear TrikRisk ! Everything said from now on in pure criticism in no mean of insulting or offending your creativity skills. So overall, I really liked Metys, I was more attached to his Lore rather than the skiil-kit. I liked the way youve created a relationship between human and demon, when in fact demons were never mentioned in the League of Legends so thats a nice idea! Though, one main thing bothered me about the story, Metys and his mother lived together for 17 years! they had nothing else but themselves because the demon locked them away, upon mother's death youve written about Metys' rage blast on his father and thats it. You didn't emphosize any of Matys' sadness, depression, feels of loss, anger and the blank space left in his heart for the only close person to him had died. Thats missing, and it's an important part of your story. So, as a close-range mage fighter he lacks of sustain and recovery buffs: movement speed, shield, heal, armor, magic resist, invulnerability, untargetable skill. Matys has none of this, what makes his playstyle much harder, in teamfights he might be wiped out quickly for he has no sustain. The closest champion I can compare Metys too is Diana. Diana also has dash, cc, but she has SHIELD too because she dives in (same issue with Kassadin). Take care of that. W ability: This ability enables Metys to perform a leap. Same as Diana his playstyle reminds of an assassin for he's melee and has dive skill. If its so, he must have a escape ability. alot of diving mages or assassins, has a special passive helping them to leap back before their being killed: {{champion:18}} {{champion:28}} {{champion:121}} {{champion:131}} {{champion:38}} "If we dive in, we might dive out too!" Necessary details missing: When you talk so much about Cooldowns and Mana usage its important you write down numbers. In some concepts numbers might be not needed, but in your case I must see numbers to understand how your champion works. Add cooldowns, mana costs and never forget ranges! Mana problematic champions: Every mana problematic champion has a passive supporting him to gain back and recover mana ... {{champion:38}} {{champion:45}} {{champion:101}} {{champion:127}} So I understand you want to create balance but a mana regenerative passive skill must be added. Non-ultimate ultimate skill: What do I mean by that? Your Ultimate skill doesnt feel really "Ultimate", it just stregthens your basic attacks, it really fits the kit but I expacted something more MASSIVE! Thats it for today, great creation! Im always here if you need my help, consultation or an advice about your champions... It feels like 7/10 for me. Have a great day! {{sticker:slayer-jinx-catface}}
thank you for the complete review though! and i forgot to say that he feels all that and hides it from everyone, which it seems i forgot to mention xD
xDree (EUNE)
: Hello dear TrikRisk ! Everything said from now on in pure criticism in no mean of insulting or offending your creativity skills. So overall, I really liked Metys, I was more attached to his Lore rather than the skiil-kit. I liked the way youve created a relationship between human and demon, when in fact demons were never mentioned in the League of Legends so thats a nice idea! Though, one main thing bothered me about the story, Metys and his mother lived together for 17 years! they had nothing else but themselves because the demon locked them away, upon mother's death youve written about Metys' rage blast on his father and thats it. You didn't emphosize any of Matys' sadness, depression, feels of loss, anger and the blank space left in his heart for the only close person to him had died. Thats missing, and it's an important part of your story. So, as a close-range mage fighter he lacks of sustain and recovery buffs: movement speed, shield, heal, armor, magic resist, invulnerability, untargetable skill. Matys has none of this, what makes his playstyle much harder, in teamfights he might be wiped out quickly for he has no sustain. The closest champion I can compare Metys too is Diana. Diana also has dash, cc, but she has SHIELD too because she dives in (same issue with Kassadin). Take care of that. W ability: This ability enables Metys to perform a leap. Same as Diana his playstyle reminds of an assassin for he's melee and has dive skill. If its so, he must have a escape ability. alot of diving mages or assassins, has a special passive helping them to leap back before their being killed: {{champion:18}} {{champion:28}} {{champion:121}} {{champion:131}} {{champion:38}} "If we dive in, we might dive out too!" Necessary details missing: When you talk so much about Cooldowns and Mana usage its important you write down numbers. In some concepts numbers might be not needed, but in your case I must see numbers to understand how your champion works. Add cooldowns, mana costs and never forget ranges! Mana problematic champions: Every mana problematic champion has a passive supporting him to gain back and recover mana ... {{champion:38}} {{champion:45}} {{champion:101}} {{champion:127}} So I understand you want to create balance but a mana regenerative passive skill must be added. Non-ultimate ultimate skill: What do I mean by that? Your Ultimate skill doesnt feel really "Ultimate", it just stregthens your basic attacks, it really fits the kit but I expacted something more MASSIVE! Thats it for today, great creation! Im always here if you need my help, consultation or an advice about your champions... It feels like 7/10 for me. Have a great day! {{sticker:slayer-jinx-catface}}
i wasnt specific on numbers cuis im tired of doing too much champion concepts xD and W isnt just a leap... dunno if you read the whole thing or not xD i like the ulti as it is, it doesnt need to be massive, but i can put the recovery buff on the ulti. and also mov speed.
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: Can you add more details to the abilities? They are rather confusing at the moment.
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: Oh, looks like you haven't been corrupted by the internet enough to know what rule 34 is :P > Rule 34 of the internet: If it exists, there's porn of it
: ~~Still waiting for r34 kindred...~~
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